I write stories about fat women, usually getting even fatter. Most are fairly dark, with realistic gain, but I've got some lighter-hearted and unrealistic stuff as well.
Feedback and constructive critique always welcome.
This is my Sandy-WG literature request.
It's Titled:
"What's Eating Sandy?"
You need a basic idea of what I want you to write. You can make a scene-for-scene remake of What’s Eating Patrick. But you might add some weight gain for Sandy’s version because his body didn’t get hardly bigger in that episode.
Also, keep in mind, this is based off an 11 minute episode. So the story might be moderately sized and nothing like an hour-long read.
But that only if I'm asking for a scene-for-scene remake where Sandy takes Patrick’s place in the episode with the eating competition. And always add a couple scenes to flesh it out.
(Sandy keeps the pufferfish DNA spliced in her. She treats it as a superpower.
- Plus, in the end, only parts of her suit rips and her UNDIES snap off.
- Her sleeves, leggings and top part of her suit remains intact, but not her UNDIES. The fat mostly goes her BUTT.
- The kid's(named little Joey) other foot isn't injured in the end.
- Sandy even proclaims that she has loads of spare spacesuits and that she will defend the belt, no matter what.
- Plus, Mr. Krabs promises her a McKrab Patty since she won.
- Don't forget the sound effects)
Aha, tempting as the outline sounds, I'm not sure I'm the writer for this particular story
Thanks for the follow - a total honour. Followed your work for years!
Thanks for writing a bunch of great stuff I wanted to read!
I'm so glad they were worth your time! Can I ask what your favourite was?
It's Just Bloating was fun, but I also really enjoyed Infrequent Flier. Hope you go back to that story some day